Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Peer review workshop feedback

As an author, I started off with an explanation to my partners for the one page long draft and that's because I haven't had much time since the meeting to write a proper, lengthy paper. I also explained my choice of the club/group and I chose to do so because I think it'll be much easier for them to understand my paper and provide me with more comments that can help me improve my essay or even ask me questions that'll lead me to find more points that are missing in my draft and can be included to answer the question clearly.

As a reviewer, I was in a group of 3 and one of my partners haven'y had his meeting yet so I only reviewed one paper. I told my partner that I think he should start off his essay by mentioning a reason why he picked that specific group and to focus more on the actions in the meeting rather than the details (How the members were dressed for an example).

After the workshop, I really am glad to have had the chance to share my paper with my classmates. I found it really helpful and beneficial to read all the comments that have helped me to focus on some parts more than the other and even tell me where are the areas that I should expand more on to reach the 1500 words requirement and why those ares specifically.

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